User:Prich080/Femininity/SoggyTimbit Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Prich080


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Prich080/Femininity


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
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I enjoyed reading your additions to the article! I think that by adding an image of a Gueshia to your tradition roles section would be a great addition and allow readers to have be able to clearly visualize what a Gueshia looks like.

Your article could use some more commas and periods to better the flow.

I think that it would be good to further explain the significance of Saartje Baartman, and add a citation if possible, so that if someone wants to they could learn more.