User:Primary resource/Aromatic compound/Groggler Peer Review

General info
Primary resource, Cmsgarbi
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Primary resource/Aromatic compound
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Aromatic compound

Evaluate the drafted changes
Inclusion of Huckel's rule in the lead is good. I don't like the original starting sentence, "mono- and polycyclic aromatic hydrocarbons" sounds bad and clutters the first sentence. Replacing the CH group with methine or vinylene is more confusing, but sounds smarter, it's a trade-off you chose. Heteroarenes could be moved out of the lead and into their own section. Overall it's a good lead. Content looks up to date. Reactions are nice just need to bring the images over, Cycloadditions and Dearomatiziation sections are short. I think an image showing meta, para, ortho position would be very nice. Switching non-benzylic arenes to "annulenes" since you don't discuss any other non-benzylic arenes.