User:Primary resource/Aromatic compound/Rmchar Peer Review

General info
Cmsgarbi, Primary resource
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Primary resource/Aromatic compound
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Aromatic compound
 * Aromatic compound

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead:

The lead does a good job of introducing how aromatic compounds are defined and how heteroarenes are related. However, it does not address other topics that are later discussed in the article like the benzene ring model or the potential reactions benzene can undergo. In the lead, there is lengthy list of example compounds which is a bit wordy, so perhaps instead tabulating this information would be a more effective way to display it.

Content:

The content is relevant to the topic and is up to date. In the lead the article discusses heteroarenes in detail but there is not much discussion beyond that. So maybe adding in reactions to do with heteroarenes would help tie the lead and the main body of the article together.

Tone and Balance:

The content presents the information in a neutral perspective and does not favour any bias.

Sources and References:

Are sources included are up to date. However there are multiple instances where sources are missing. For example, "he proper use of the symbol is debated: some publications use it to any cyclic π system, while others use it only for those π systems that obey Hückel's rule. " is not cited. In particular, the sections titled "Benzene Ring Model" and "Polycyclic Aromatic Hydrocarbons" have multiple instances of missing references.

Organization:

The organization of the content is well done, but once again, I think that adding in tables and images where possible could help with clarity.

Images and Media:

The images included are good, but they are not referenced in the text so when reading it is initially difficult to know what part of the text the image is meant to be a part of. Adding in figure references could help with this problem so readers can easily identify what part of the text each image is linked to. As well, spacing the images out a bit more may make it a bit more visually appealing rather than a single long column of images.