User:Primordialroot/Evolutionary anachronism/A.twohig Peer Review

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Primordialroot
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What you have currently is very well written, but it's not quite clear what evolutionary anachronism actually is. I think your article would benefit from a clear intro paragraph, maybe with some definitions or brief explanation of what "anachronism" means and how it can be applied to evolution. I really appreciate your use of real-life examples, such as the section on G. keule. I think what you currently have going is an excellent body for the article, as it goes into detail about a specific example. Keep up the good work :-)