User:Princekahree washington/Societal impact of nanotechnology/Andrew ferdetta Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Princekahree


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Princekahree%20washington/Societal_impact_of_nanotechnology/Bibliography?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_bibliography


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Societal impact of nanotechnology

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead of the draft is pretty good. It has the details needed for the section that is getting edited. You did a good job of starting the section with an attention-grabbing start. As for the content, it is well written with many details on how nanotechnology can be used in warfare with no important content missing but I do think you should go more in detail on the Intellectual property issues and social justice aspects. The tone and balance was very neutral with no signs of bias even on such a controversial topic. It looks like all of the viewpoints are mentioned but I do believe you should go more in detail with the dangers of Nanotechnology especially in the medical area. The sources listed in the Bibliography seem to be up-to-date with the oldest one being from 2014. The sources themselves come from good information sources with different authors. On the organisation front I am assuming you are only editing one section. In that case it is fine. However if you are editing multiple sections then I suggest you split it up. There are no images/media so you're good there. Overall I must say your contribution draft is looking very good. My only real suggestion is to add more about nanotechnology's impact on medicine.