User:Princessslayerr/Pestivirus/Hbl711 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Princessslayerr and SpringBio2022


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Princessslayerr/Pestivirus?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Pestivirus

Evaluate the drafted changes
The content is relevant to the topic and covers a sufficient amount of the vaccination against Pestivirus. The added content is neutral. It conveys facts just as they are without adding any biased opinions or attempting to convince the reader toward any one position.

All of the new content was backed up by a source which is good. The sources also cover a broad description of the topic of vaccines against pestivirus and the effects of pestivirus on cattle. A majority of the sources were written within the last five years which is good, however, one was written in 2001 and another in 1990 which is fairly dated.

The added content is not organized very well. The sentences don't flow together very well. Also the added content could probably be added to the article under its own new heading of "Vaccines" maybe.