User:PrincetonDouglas/College football/Tombrady1283 Peer Review

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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:College football
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):College football

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Article is well organized with good lead. Successfully explains history of college football, but the history section is very long. Would likely be beneficial to shorten the History section. Successfully explains expansion of college football. Article hits on nearly every important aspect of college football, and gives valuable insight.