User:Priyaraymond/Functional neurologic disorder/Tltuggle18 Peer Review

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What you edited in your sandbox is very good! for the rest of the article I suggest finding images to add and expanding on the causes section. The causes section could have more order in it and maybe there are updated sources that expand on the causes of functional neurologic disorder.

"The Diagnostic and Statistical Manual of Mental Illness (DSM-5) lists the following diagnostic criteria for functional neurological symptoms (conversion disorder):" that section could go under signs and symptoms as a subsection because it's listed as criteria. Another thing I would do is put it under associated conditions. Although it is under diagnosis so I would ask the professor to be sure.

Under History I found this sentence that needed a citation, " In 1980, the DSM III added 'conversion disorder' to its list of conditions. The diagnostic criteria for this condition are nearly identical to those used for hysteria. The diagnostic criteria were: [citation needed]".

Still a lot of work to do but the lead section you've edited was really good!