User:Procyon1101/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Mozambican War of Independence

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
The process of how Mozambique gained independence is critical in understanding the current state of Mozambique after the long period of colonization by the Portuguese.

Evaluate the article
(Compose a detailed evaluation of the article here, considering each of the key aspects listed above. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what a useful Wikipedia article evaluation looks like.)

The article seemed to be well-organized with each of the sections evenly proportioned. The article divided the content mainly into three categories -- background, conflict, and aftermath -- and each content helped me understand the subject well.

The article would be more informative if it includes the types mistreatment the indigenous people had to undergo. It lacks explanations about how the indigenous culture was overwhelmed by the Portuguese.

Also, the article utilizes a neutral tone with mainly explicating historical facts. The description about the lives of indigenous people before the formation of FRELIMO is not very detailed.

Overall, it is a well-written article with more than twenty references. However, there is one online source that refers to another Wikipedia article and an online news article which does not work.

The talk is mostly about difficulties of finding detailed, accurate information. There seemed to have been difficulties in identifying the causation and the result of events.

The article is rated B-class and is a part of WikiProject Africa.