User:ProfGray/312/ibud

Team ibud: User Talk:TWloveandhonor, User Talk:Adrugby, User Talk:AL2015, User Talk:IMcayat, AB

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User:TWloveandhonor I like that you mention exactly what you are going to say, but maybe the last sentence you could be more clear. Adrugby (talk) 20:39, 18 February 2015 (UTC)

User: Adrugby You have legitimate claims here but you should rephrase the authors instead of just quoting them. Sub-headings would also help so it's easier to navigate your page. TWloveandhonor (talk) 20:38, 16 February 2015 (UTC)

User Talk:TWloveandhonor -- I think the information you have on your sandbox would be a great fit to the Wikipedia article. My only suggestion is to change the wording so that you can add it directly to the Wikipedia page. AL2015 (talk) 20:38, 16 February 2015 (UTC)

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AL2015 (talk) 17:33, 27 February 2015 (UTC)

TWloveandhonor (talk) 22:32, 1 March 2015 (UTC)