User:ProfShanSwan/Blue carbon/Nataliaalvarez583 Peer Review

General info
Megan Walton- "Blue Carbon"
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Blue carbon
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Blue carbon

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall, this article alone has potential from the topic of Blue Carbon. However, there is a lot of suggestions to consider. The article needs to have structural changes to better follow the format. Along with that, there needs to be an explanation or history on why the carbon is blue and how that happened before diving into what is the importance of this and why people should care about this. The article needs to refocus and center on the main idea because it got a little side-tracked.