User:ProfessionalGoObEr/Comisión Geográfico-Exploradora/Cole Rhoades Peer Review

General info
ProfessionalGoObEr
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:ProfessionalGoObEr/Comisión Geográfico-Exploradora
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Doesn't exist currently

Evaluate the drafted changes
Good article so far. Has good information, but needs to remove emotionally charged wording (one example being in Late Years, " unfortunately though it would not last as the start of the Mexican revolution would soon bring about with the fall of Porfirio Diazes government and eventually the CGE's office in Xalapa Veracruz would be occupied and turned into a military barrack which would effectively lead to the end of the organization." Writing should be as unbiased as possible.)

Links multiple articles.

Needs more references (sadly "trust me bro" is not a valid source). Citing error on the first reference (there is error text that needs to get removed or corrected.) Could also use more citations in the article itself.

Has good formatting. and organization.

Good media and captions.

Very good lead!!! :)

Content is relevant and up to date. Remember to maintain a neutral tone.

Okay grammar-wise, but phrasing can be changed to make the article more concise and less clunky. Reread article to catch words that haven't been properly capitalized.

Overall, very good start, but needs refinement. Good work!!!