User:ProfessionalGoObEr/Comisión Geográfico-Exploradora/JJS222 Peer Review

General info
ProfessionalGoObEr
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:ProfessionalGoObEr/Comisión Geográfico-Exploradora
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):N/A

Evaluate the drafted changes
Starting with the sources, Source 1 is missing a title and is generally unusable (as you probably know). Otherwise, this is a strong start! Within the actual article, be sure to keep your accent marks consistent. There are a few grammatical and punctuation errors that will need to be fixed prior to publishing, and some word choices "500 odd maps" is too conversational for Wikipedia. Changing it to "approximately 500 maps" might be better suited. All in all, the flow of the article seems good for this draft. Be sure to double-check punctuation and spelling, as well as tone, and you'll be alright!