User:PrometheusDOW/National Equal Rights Party/Historywiki10 Peer Review

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National Equal Rights Party
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I'm glad you are updating this wikipedia article! Very interesting, I did not know who the first female candidates for US presidency were until I read this. I would include the date in the first sentence to give more info on the timeframe. It is very concise and neutral, which is great. I would like to see more information about how many votes they received if you could find it.

Content

Content is great! Everything is relevant, I would be interested to see what happened to this party and if it is still around to this day.

Tone/Balance

Very neutral, stating the facts. I did not feel persuaded to feel one way or another. Purely informational.

Sources/References

Great sources! I checked the links and they all worked. Varying authors and good secondary sources.

Organization

Well organized! I would like to see a section on legacy or aftermath of the party. Grammar is good, start the paragraphs with the tab function.

Overall Impression

Very impressive! The existing article is very sparse on information. I would add the membership count and if the party is still current. Maybe you could find an image of the party slogans or voting poster. All in all great work!