User:PrometheusDOW/National Equal Rights Party/SkittlesGirl21 Peer Review

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PrometheusDOW
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 * National Equal Rights Party

Lead
I thought this was a strong lead section overall. It concisely described the information in the article and reflected the new updates that this group was contributing. However, I would recommend adding a section that includes a brief description of each major section in the article, as this will improve its overall organization.

Content
The content was all relevant to the topic and improved equity gaps on Wikipedia by adding additional details about a political party focused on the enfranchisement of women. But some sections of the article were slightly confusing. For instance, you say "it is debated that she actually ran for office" but all of the sources implied she definitely ran for office. I would suggest adding more information on the opposing view that she did not run, or deleting this sentence if those sources are are not available. I would change the organization of the Belva Lockwood section to put the information about her early life in the beginning, opposed to the middle, to help with the flow. Other than that, all of the content was informative, well-written, and up to date, great job!

Tone
This article has a neutral tone and does not try to convince the reader of a certain stance which I appreciate. Y'all did a great job making it sound like an encyclopedia opposed to a argumentative essay.

Images and Media
There do not appear to be any images related to this article. Perhaps, if there are photos of Lockwood or the convention itself, this would add visual benefits to the reader and make them more engage, if they exist within copyright regulations of course.

Overall Impressions

This was a great addition to the existing article on the National Equal Rights Party. You added great information about Lockwood and and Alfred Love. However, from the existing article it seems there are some additional details you may want to expand on. For example, Fredrick Douglas ran on the ticket with Victoria Woodhull. Does information exist about their candidacy together? That could be an interesting detail to add. Also, you should hyperlink more existing articles to your page. For example, if Woodhull or Lockwood have articles on Wikipedia already that would be a good way to garner more traction.

Also, this is relatively minor but is there any sources about what happened to the party? Did it dissolve or join with another political party? This seems like it would be a good way to conclude the article but there is not any information on that as stands.