User:PspOU/Aftermath of the Falklands War/Graybeboy Peer Review

General info
PspOU
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:PspOU/Aftermath_of_the_Falklands_War?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Aftermath of the Falklands War

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead

No, the lead has not been updated.

Content

One change that the peer might consider making is removing/reducing/clarifying the long quote in the third paragraph.

Tone and Balance

It seems fairly balanced.

Sources and References

The only source cited in the sandbox draft seems reliable.

Organization

The language is easy to understand, there don't appear to be any glaring grammar issues, and it appears well organized.