User:PspOU/Aftermath of the Falklands War/IllusiveAttic11 Peer Review

General info
PSPOU
 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:PspOU/Aftermath_of_the_Falklands_War?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Aftermath of the Falklands War

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think that the section regarding the United States and Latin America can have more added to it. There is only one section about the United States. More can be added to that and, if a significant amount of information is added, it can be separated into its own section. The same can be said about the Latin America section. I'm sure that more can be found about other Latin American countries, and how they felt about the Falkland War. The section that is there is good, and the language is neutral.

I think that more can be added about the visit of the pope section. Maybe a subsection titled something like "The position of the church" can be added, with the visit of the pope being included in that. More can be added regarding how clergy in the UK and Argentina reacted to the War.

Also, similarly to the section about the Soviet Union, I think that the same sort of information can be added about the US, and the effects that the Falklands War had on the Cold War and vice versa.

There are some parts, like in the Soviet intelligence section, that are speculative, I don't know how Wikipedia feels about speculation.

Maybe a brief overview of the article can be added to the Introduction section. the article goes down some holes that are not even close to being mentioned in the intro.

The article is neutral in standing, and gives a good description of all of the different actors in the War.