User:Psun23/Dandelion coffee/Pjuan8 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User: Psun23/Dandelion Coffee


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:Psun23/Dandelion_coffee&oldid=1002114101
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Dandelion_coffee&oldid=1000754368

Lead
When comparing the recently published article on January 16th to the current revision by Psun23, it appears there has been little to no updates to the lead to represent what will be included in the article. However, the existing lead is concise and what the term Dandelion 'coffee' means. Although the lead is concise, I believe that there could be more revisions to be done to introduce what the article will include.

Content
As mentioned above, the article has little to no revisions from the most recent revision by user Monkbot to the sandbox draft for Psun23.

Tone and Balance
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Sources and References
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Organization
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Images and Media
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New Article
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Overall Impression
I found after reading the article and comparing the current version to the draft I am reviewing, there can be significant additions to the article. A few questions I had after finishing the article: Can you expand on the preparation and research section? How long does the preparation process last? As of 2021, is there any new research done in the correlation between cancer treatment and dandelion coffee (maybe add graphs of recent studies, if any)?