User:PsychStudent21/Schizoaffective disorder/Aupri Peer Review

General info

 * Reviewing: Schizoaffective disorder
 * New contributions: User:PsychStudent21/Schizoaffective disorder

Lead
The lead is informative but is too long and has some information that seems too specific or is only tangentially related to Schizoaffective disorder such as the sentence about concern that antidepressants may increase mania/psychosis. The first paragraph does a good job at summarizing the disorder but could still be truncated after the first few sentences.

Content
Adding a section for epidemiology was a good idea but now it looks somewhat lacking so it could be expanded on. You could add information on its prevalence across different age groups in both a cross-sectional and longitudinal sense and add in exact statistics about the differences between men and women, for example. Content is adequate but could be more detailed.

Tone and Balance
The content added is neutral and makes no attempts to persuade. Everything added was a fact or statistic that can't be misinterpreted. Overall excellent balance.

Sources and References
The source for electroconvulsive therapy is getting kind of old and can no longer be accessed on the original website only archive.com and the last sentence under epidemiology doesn't have a source. Aside from that all the sources look reputable and are accessible.

Organization
There are no grammar or spelling errors present and added content is clear and concise. The contributions are nicely organized. A mere suggestion would be to put the epidemiology section after diagnosis and before treatment because at least to me thats where it makes most sense but it's not too important.

Overall impressions
The contributions added quality new information. If anything I think you could add more detail.