User:PsychStudent21/Schizoaffective disorder/Brian Dooley Peer Review

General info

 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User:PsychStudent21/sandbox

Content

 * Electroconvulsive therapy is a good addition but it feels like more could be added to improve it such as its effectiveness as a treatment or any potential risks of the treatment.
 * For the epidemiology section you have 30% for ages 25-35 is this the largest percentage for an age range and can you find information on other age ranges.

Tone and Balance
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 * Overall pretty balanced addition to the article. Not sure if it is just the way it is written but the part where it talks about the differences between men and women seems a little biased.

Organization
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Brian Dooley (talk) 21:34, 27 March 2020 (UTC)
 * It is easy to understand but I'm not sure if the semicolon between men and however is necessary.