User:Psychcap/Military psychology/Gsch23 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Pyschcap


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Psychcap/Military_psychology?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Military psychology

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think you've done a great job expanding on the lead of the article! The only issues I saw was mostly formatting which I know Dr. Rahn already left comments on. When it comes to things that could be added to the published article, I would recommend going through the 'Role' section to make sure all of that information is necessary for the article. It just seems jampacked with information that might not be entirely cohesive. Then I would potentially update the 'History' section with some newer example if there are any. Keep up the good work!