User:Psychcap/Military psychology/Srivera6 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

psychcap


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Psychcap/Military_psychology?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Military psychology

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I think what you have added so far to your lead paragraph is great! I am a little confused about your citations, so be sure to clear all of that up!

I see that you have added the topics of specific wars into the lead article. I think, since you added this, you could maybe go on to add more information under the subtopics of the wars that come up later in the article. For example, the Korean War and Vietnam War have only around a sentence of information under each, so maybe that is something you could go on to elaborate about. On the topic of where the article could have more information, I also think that there could be more of a focus on the frequency of PTSD in the military, and the role of military psychology in such (maybe in prevention). Again, this is something that was mentioned in the lead, but is only shortly elaborated on in the actual article!