User:Psychcap/Military psychology/Tolber2K Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Psychcap


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Psychcap/Military psychology


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Military psychology

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hello! It appears that the article itself is lacking in diverse and different perspectives from across the world. Try to not just think of conflicts in America. Wikipedia is available all over the world so using examples of conflicts only America has fought in may not be the most generalizable to the world at large when seeing combat. Search for journals regarding Military Psychology that occur in other parts of the world, specifically ones that do not involve the United States to offer a more generalized approach.