User:PsychologyGrad2023/Avoidant/restrictive food intake disorder/WhiteRabbitLAS Peer Review

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I am completely impressed with PsychologyGrad2023's additions to this page. I think that this is an overlooked topic that is so important to have up-to-date information on. I particularly like the explanation of the two types of patients. I think that this can help people who are maybe concerned about someone in their who turned to Wikipedia for answers. In the prevention section I may recommend using more neutral phrasings. It sounds a little biased and may be interpreted as assigning blame and hinting that there is is malintent by parents.