User:Psychologylearner1/Ecopsychology/Alaynna2023 Peer Review

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== Hey! I really like how you have info about the cultural concepts. I would recommend adding more about the practical application of this topic in indigenous communities.I read through the original article and there is that you can add to it. I think that adding to the history section would be helpful. Giving some more recent history would be great to add. The beliefs section is also not well written so I think that you could make that a lot better. Maybe change the name from beliefs to something like more scientific, add some information to make it easier to fully understand this topic. Good Luck!! ==