User:Psychologylearner1/Ecopsychology/Leanna321 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Psychologylearner1


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Psychologylearner1/Ecopsychology


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Ecopsychology

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think you have already made some very valuable contributions to the article by adding a section about indigenous perspectives and how they relate to the topic. I would suggest moving the section about indigenous perspectives on ecopsychology and TEK to the history section as a subcategory, just because I think these ideas fit well into the “Origins of ecopsychology” section. If you do move it to the history section, I also think it would work best at the very beginning of the section, since the indigenous ideas have probably been around a lot longer than any of the other ideas that are talked about in the history section. Having this section earlier would also give context for information in the Roszak section which references those ideas later on. I would also suggest adding more description about which indigenous peoples had these ideas, or, if these are ideas from almost all indigenous peoples, specifying that it was indigenous populations around the world. I also noticed that there were a lot of places in the original article that were marked as needing a citation, so that could be another area to improve if you have time.