User:Psychstudent20/Growling/CourteneyD1999 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Psychstudent20


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Psychstudent20/Growling


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Growling

Evaluate the drafted changes
I was curious as to if you would be able to combine what you have written about growling in canines to the second paragraph currently in that section of the article since that section mentions growling to protect food and mentions the size of the dog (trying to make them bigger) so I think this would be an appropriate place to add your contribution. There is also mentionof food protection in the orignal article's section on the function of aggressive growling so it might be beneficial to consider mentioning the more aggressive food protection in overweight dogs.

There is a few grammatical and spelling errors that can be fixed upon review. Many sentences lack periods (just a heads up). I feel like the wording of some sentences may be a little awkward, but that could just be how I read it in my head. I think it would be beneficial to maybe add some more links in your article. Sources are up to date. ~CourteneyD1999