User:Pudge10/Social learning theory/Aks163 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Social learning theory


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
After reviewing the initial article and the sandbox, I think the history and theoretical background category can be shortened and more focused on major events. As well a lot of the other sections could also be shortened and summarized. The article has a lot of topics that are overexplained or lead to other topics that aren't fully needed.