User:Pudge10/Social learning theory/Mrkite412 Peer Review

Overall this wiki page already has a decent amount of information on the topic. I did notice that the section about the history and and theoretical background was rather lengthy. I would recommend looking over this section and try to edit some unnecessary information out or move some of this information into other sections that could use more text. Again, I think this wiki page already has a lot of information but could use some reorganizing.

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