User:Pufferfish12/Kim Mun language/Porkey & Toothy Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Pufferfish12


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Pufferfish12/Kim_Mun_language/Porkey%20&%20Toothy_Peer_Review?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_peer_review
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Kim Mun language

Evaluate the drafted changes
A lot of contributions were made especially in Distribution and History.

The tone is neutral throughout the article.

In-text citation seems to be missing in the following part: "In Vietnam, Kim Mun is spoken in the following provinces: Bac Giang, Dak Nong, Dien Bien, Ha Giang, Lao Cai, Quang Ninh, Tuyen Quang, and Yen Bai provinces."

Most of the topic is relevant, however, in the history section, it says "In Laos, they became known as the Lanten (from Chinese word "indigo" 蓝靛), because of their association with indigo-dyed clothing and indigo market.[1]" It was interesting information, but  how it related to the history of the language was not clear.

Great work overall!