User:PumpkinBread11/Concrete mixer/Citrusaries Peer Review

General info
(provide username) PumpkinBread11
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:PumpkinBread11/Concrete Mixer
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Concrete mixer

Evaluate the drafted changes
Maybe this is something on my end, but I seem to be unable to see the actual draft of your article. I do see your citation page, though, so I will review that and see what I can come up with for feedback.

You have a really solid bibliography going, I don't think I have an qualms with it at all so you're really set up well as far as sources are concerned.

I can see that you have a few sentences telling me a little bit about your article draft as well. I see that you are thinking of adding more to the history section, as well as some other subsections about the inventors, purposes, and advancements of the cement trucks. These all sound like great ideas! The cement mixer wikipedia page has a ton of great information but I agree that there's always room for additions and if you have the knowledge base, it'd be amazing to see your information added to the page. Knowing your writing abilities from other assignments I am confident in your ability to create a great section of additions to the cement truck page, and I look forward to potentially reading your final draft.