User:PunxsutawneyPhiladelphia/2006 Asian Games/Biographiefrfm Peer Review

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 * 2006 Asian Games
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 * 2006 Asian Games

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I am unsure of what the recent changes are, and how they've shaped the article overall. Thus, I will analyze the live version of the article.

The introduction does a solid job of introducing the 2006 Asian Games, its structure, and its results. However, I believe this section could better emphasize the significance and magnitude of the event: what is its reputation within the athletic committee?

The tone of the article is appropriately neutral and informative. Perhaps a bit more would be desirable in regards to the controversy of Qatar's bid (especially now, given the evolution of sports corruption and Qatar's eventual hosting of the 2022 World Cup).

There is extensive citation and sourcing, which is great. I do not see any information which is clearly missing a citation.

I like the description of the opening and closing ceremonies: they are very descriptive and strongly depict cultural significance. This inspires me to prioritize the significance of events in my own article edits.