User:Puppyluver1234/School segregation in the United States/PurplePhoneLaptop Peer Review

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PuppyLuver1234
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 * School segregation in the United States:

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Catholic Schools

The information you plan to add based on your source titles "Challenging Racism in Catholic Schools through Intimate School Leadership" by Micheal Santa is powerful and relevent to the article you chose. The article only seems to give dates where desegregation panned, but it fails to list some of the current relevant facts. With just the title of the section form your source, I would be careful not to steer too far from the topic of the School system. However, i do think it is worth briefly mentioning the other institutions that are effected.

Where you thinking of adding some of the information about police involvement after the first sentence of the Catholic schools section?

Protestant Schools

This is a powerful section to add to because there is very little information on the topics.

Suggestions

I am curious to see where you incorporate your four sources into. I also think that you ould use your source detailing Brown v. Board of education and add to any places speaking about that case. Maybe consider adding to the sections about disparties about funding like "Residential segregation".