User:PurplePhoneLaptop/Race and maternal health in the United States/Puppyluver1234 Peer Review

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PurplePhoneLaptop
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The adding of Postpartum Care talking about how Black and Hispanic women are more likely than white women to report moderate to severe pain postpartum and less likely to receive prescriptions for opioids upon discharge. Is something that was well said and gave good insight.

Serena Williams. The few sentences about this was well written and recent in todays world. Showing that it still happens.

Good removing bias statements.

I think you could add another example like Serena Williams maybe from the past 5 years.