User:Purplekevin/Honey trapping/Samsara 11 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Purplekevin


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Purplekevin/Honey_trapping/Bibliography?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_bibliography


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Honey trapping

Evaluate the drafted changes
First of all I think the article draft is clear to understand when defining what honey trapping is. The information comes from a neutral standpoint and has a well organized structure. Also, the part on espionage is relevant and adds interesting information to the article. The edited article was pasted into the bibliography editing space when it should in the sandbox draft section for editing. The article is very small compared to other Wikipedia articles so I suggest maybe adding another section or some media to make it more pleasurable to the reader. The sources for the article look to be all good. I suggest adding some quick definitions to the See Also section to the article. Overall the article is clear, concise, and does a great job on providong the reader with what they need to know.