User:Purplesquire/Herpesviral meningitis/RwdSimpson Peer Review

General info
Purplesquire
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Purplesquire/Herpesviral_meningitis?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Herpesviral meningitis - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall, a noticeable improvement over the original article. Changing the opening paragraph to a more general overview of the topic and then moving into the specifics like diagnoses and treatments in the subsections gives the article a more natural flow.

There seems to be good, solid sources for the key points of information brought up in the article. And anytime another topic is brought up you link to its page, which is helpful.

I don't know how feasible this is for your topic, but if you could find information to help flesh out the existing subsections, I feel like that would be the best way to further improve this article.