User:PyroMythology/Cabrakan/OppsieDaisy Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * pyromythology's cabrakan

(provide username)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:PyroMythology/Cabrakan?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Cabrakan

Evaluate the drafted changes
article of the cabrakan is well summarized. the draft references many sources and adds in what was already on wikipedia about cabrakan. the draft talks about family ties, appearances and the defeat of cabrakan.