User:Pyruvate kinase/AIDS-defining clinical condition/AGR379 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jay2saucy, Kaitlynnehafer, Pyruvate kinase


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Pyruvate%20kinase/AIDS-defining_clinical_condition?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * AIDS-defining clinical condition

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead- The draft provided gives a good introduction on what AIDS is, though it does not link into what the Article is actually about, a List of how the Government Defines HIV/AIDS. This should be included.

Content- The only content provided was the lead.

Tone- The tone is good and sounds how a Wikipedia article should.

Sources- No sources provided.

Organization- No organization provided.

Media- No media provided.

Overall impressions- The information provided is a good start for an introduction, it just needs some sources and another paragraph tying it in to the point of the article.