User:Pyruvate kinase/AIDS-defining clinical condition/Alejandroherrera1 Peer Review

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I Liked how much the information was listed behind how they were talking about (AIDS) in this page introduction. This contact has brought valid and strong sources to back up the facts they brought within this research page. The only view points i see that was underrepresented was statistics of percentages of the population as a whole contains this disorder. I truly liked how much this paper describes what goes on in your body when you gain this disorder. It bring light was what is out there when you are not careful.