User:Qmao12/Shen Congwen/Siyi Shen Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? Qmao12
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User:Qmao12/Shen Congwen

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer? Yes.
 * Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic? Yes.
 * Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections? Yes, but it is not brief enough. I think it is not necessary to list his work in the Lead.
 * Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article? No.
 * Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed? It is overly detailed. The evaluation of his works can be written in the following section instead of in the Lead. (It is only my opinion.)

Content
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added relevant to the topic? Yes.
 * Is the content added up-to-date? Yes.
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong? No.
 * Does the article deal with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps? Does it address topics related to historically underrepresented populations or topics? No.

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added neutral? Yes.
 * Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position? No.
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented? If the content is a Lead, there is no issue about this question. If it is a paragraph of the article, there is no evidence to support the topic.
 * Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another? No.

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information?Yes. There is no link on the Bibliography page. There is no citation link in the sandbox either. I have no access to check whether the content is backed up by a reliable secondary source.
 * Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic? Yes.
 * Are the sources current? Yes.
 * Are the sources written by a diverse spectrum of authors? Do they include historically marginalized individuals where possible? No link to access the sources.
 * Check a few links. Do they work? No link to access the sources.

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read? It is well-written.
 * Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors? Spelling errors: Atobiography
 * Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic? The content with all major points of the topic.

Images and Media
Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media


 * Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic? NA
 * Are images well-captioned? NA
 * Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations? NA
 * Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way? NA

For New Articles Only
If the draft you're reviewing is a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.


 * Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject?
 * How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject?
 * Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles?
 * Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable?

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete? No, the content added is to improve the lead.(I think) But, there is nothing added related to the content of the topic.
 * What are the strengths of the content added? The content added(Marriage and Family), which is helpful to learn about how this influences Shen Congwen such as his writing style and content of his works.
 * How can the content added be improved? I am more interested in the part of Marriage and Family section.