User:Quaquaversalll/Blue Prism Painting I/Dismurrt Peer Review

General info
Quaquaversalll
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Quaquaversalll/Blue_Prism_Painting_I?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):n/a

Evaluate the drafted changes
You have a very good sense of language and describe this work in a very efficient manner. In fact, I may actually tone down some of the larger words you use in order to prevent any confusion to the general public who may not be so familiar with the larger terms. For example, I might replace "replications" with "replica." You additionally do a wonderful job citing each piece of information you add. There is a veyr clear organization of your sources, which makes your article very easy to understand. Lastly, I am not so sure if you need the extra sentence on your artist, especially if you were to create a hyperlink with his name in it. Overall, your article is very promising so far, and very easily understandable. I look forward to seeing it evolve.