User:QueenStarrUniverse/Competence factor/Antfazz Peer Review

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QueenStarrUniverse


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 * User:QueenStarrUniverse/Competence factor


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Evaluate the drafted changes
The article starts off with a good solid description of Competence, what it is, and why it is important. Sources are reliable and various,, and the writers do a good job of staying neutral and providing nonbiased information. Organization is good so far.

It would be good to include more information from each source rather than just a sentence or two. Great start but it steel just seems like a face value of competence factor. It would also be good to see some diagrams involves seeing as their sources seem to have illustrations.