User:QueenStarrUniverse/Competence factor/KenzeeF Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

QueenStarrUniverse


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:QueenStarrUniverse/Competence factor


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead


 * Lead reflects new content that has been added
 * Lead includes introductory sentence
 * Lead is concise

Content


 * Content added is relevant to the topic
 * Content added is up to date

Tone and Balance


 * Content has neutral tone

Sources and References


 * All current content is backed up by reliable source
 * Content reflects the source material

Overall impressions


 * The content that has been added is informative, the writing has a nice flow and is easy to follow.
 * Page just needs to expand upon the information in the lead and build up the body of the article.
 * Some added images might enhance the article visually.