User:QueenStarrUniverse/Competence factor/MichaelYoung72 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

QueenStarrUniverse


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:QueenStarrUniverse/Competence_factor?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The article is well written and provides information on the definition of natural competence, though it appears to be underdeveloped and incomplete at this stage. It might be helpful for some readers to provide additional explanation of how competence translates to fitness within a given environment. Overall, it appears that this article is moving in the right direction and will be very useful once it has been completed.