User:QueenStarrUniverse/Competence factor/Nadirkhan124 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

QueenStarrUniverse, Dayvid3589, Gfullller, Kkiing08


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:QueenStarrUniverse/Competence_factor?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I thought the article was well written as it just being started. It is very organized and it is very easy to read and understand. The sources that were used were also very good, as they related to what was said in the article as well as the fact they are packed with lots of information and are very reliable. I think for the section of Factors Determining Competence, there could be an addition of more background information before getting to the exact specifics. The tone and balance was very neutral throughout which was great! Overall I think the article following the same trend in the lead and a little more background knowledge right before presentation is going to turn out great.