User:Queenb8/Rudolf Weigl/Hopehall323 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Queenb8


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Rudolf Weigl


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Rudolf Weigl

drafted changes
It looks like a solid building block. It is very short. Is there any information about his education, childhood, personal life or anything? I think it is organized very well and is very clear and concise. It flows well but just needs some more information. The grammar is on point and the structure works very well.