User:Quercusfanatic/Mast (botany)/Gwood3710 Peer Review

I see you have references, but they're not embedded within the paragraph yet which I'm sure you already know. However, it makes it a little harder for me to review because I can't tell what is being referenced to what.

What are some examples of balanocultures? are they still around today or are they primarily historical peoples?

" but we can assume that anywhere mast species exist, cultures may have consumed them." unless this was referenced in a peer reviewed paper, "assuming" takes away from the neutrality and factuality of your paragraph.

"a "primitive food" Acorns" missing a period?

"Acorns were also also important" typo

"Although not as important as in the past, mast still holds some significance today as an emergency food source in industrial society." just want to make sure this is cited and not your own opinion

overall, a very interesting addition and I think it adds a unique and interesting twist into the story of mast historically. I'm not super familiar with it, but appreciate learning about the cultural significance's of it! good luck!