User:QuinceeN/Entomacrodus marmoratus/Furunol Peer Review

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QuinceeN
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:QuinceeN/Entomacrodus_marmoratus?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Entomacrodus marmoratus

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Hi Quincee,

When looking at your sandbox I was unfortunately unable to find your first draft inside it. Just in case you never had time to get to it last week some advice I can give to you about what you can add to your article could be topics that Professor recommended last week which are the lead section, description (includes anatomy & morphology), distribution & habitat, Human use & cultural significance, All these sections would be good to be added to your species article as their is only one sentence currently in your species article telling readers what the species scientific name and Hawaiian name is. One source that I found that may help you get started https://scholarspace.manoa.hawaii.edu/server/api/core/bitstreams/449d109f-8395-4857-905d-eaabd4e354b4/content, does not have that much information about the Entomacrodus marmoratus but does have detailed information about its distribution, habitat, and some physical as well as anatomic descriptions of the species. As for advice when writing your draft, although many sources may not have a lot of information about your species, sometimes you may need to extensively search through the sources for the smallest documented details about your species which can help you towards writing your draft.

Best of luck,

Landen Furuno