User:Quinnfelisa/Theatre and disability/Barbramartin622 Peer Review

Overall I was very impressed with your additions to inclusion of disabled characters in theatrical works. I feel like you were able to start to compile a very accurate, inclusive list of characters that have yet to be identified as disabled. I would love to see further additions to this list seeing as you included both musicals and plays, I believe there are more characters that could fit on this list. Furthermore, I'd love if you were able to include if overall you see this representation as negative or positive/ how it moves the story forward. Your sources were excellent and overall you did a great job!

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