User:Quovi/Mangrove crab/RaineRuthanneWay Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Quovi, Caffeinatedmicrobe, Saraberger, Drumm065


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Such0051/Iron_Springs_Bog_SNA?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Mangrove crab

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead paragraph has a lot of sentences where not a lot is being said. The part where the foraging habits of the crabs is described could use another few words saying how the crab removes carbon. I would also suggest the paragraph be split into phylogeny and the two main crab species, so flipping the information and splitting it into categories. I liked how the human impact section had a lot of good organization with small labeled paragraphs. The bibliography also seemed up to date, nothing was particularly old.